Mercy of the Mind

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Butterfly, Sep 8, 2012.

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  1. Butterfly

    Butterfly Pokémon Master Staff Alumni SF Author SF Supporter

    Hate
    Burn
    Die
    What was that?
    Who are you?
    Get a grip!

    Love
    Live
    Smile
    I feel great
    Thoughts race
    Agitate!

    Alone
    Lost
    Confused
    Zip it up
    Hide away
    Fake a smile!

    Believe
    Trust
    Hope
    Yeah, right
    We don’t care
    Go away!

    Death
    Hurt
    Hate
    Crisis point
    Impulses
    This is it!

    Mercy
    Of
    Mind
    Can you make sense of it?
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Very well written hun we are at mercy sometimes at what our mind throws at us i so related to your poem hugs
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Sometimes we forget that we can hold all these things in our mind at the same time...it is the voice that is the strongest that we pay attention to, when, in fact, there are others as well...there is a notion called, 'the truer self', the voice of reason, that is sometimes difficult to find, but important to search for...hope you are feeling better today
     
  4. SashaJade

    SashaJade Well-Known Member

    Love this; hope you're doing okay beautiful <3 :wub:
     
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