Messenger

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  1. I’ve become the midnight owl
    where ravenous demons ever prowl
    Here within the night I’m granted
    a darker form of sight
    Here where the night preys on me,
    and there is nothing that I wish to see
    Voracious, all-consuming
    Feasting on reason, using
    every means to conquer peace
    with sordid ease
    Eating away at the core of me
    stealing my causes easily,
    shattering the core of a once sacred reality
    How to remain sane
    when I can no longer remember my name
    It was “messenger”
    But I have nothing left to say,
    none that is good
    Oh, woe,
    that I could


    FAL1
     
  2. riz

    riz Senior Member

    I think you are a fantastic writer.
     
  3. Abacus21

    Abacus21 Staff Alumni

    Indeed!

    You're a great writer, FAL1 :)

    Keep it up :hug:
     
  4. Thanks for your replies. I write these things at 3-4 in the morning and I can't sleep. Worst time of the day except for waking up again to more of the same...


    FAL1
     
  5. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    You are wayyyyy past a great writer, you never cease to amaze me! :clap:
     
  6. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I agree with all the above comments - I like all your writings!:smile: You do indeed have much talent!

    love,

    least
     
  7. :cry:

    I'm dying
     
  8. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    :sad: Please don't!:sad:

    love and hugs,

    least
     
  9. It's not in my hands anymore
     
  10. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow its beautiful...

    BP
     
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