Midnight Paintbrush

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by WarpedNTwisted, Sep 11, 2006.

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  1. This is a poem i wrote about a week and a half ago..i hope u guys like it

    its also posted on allpoetry.com

    Midnight Paintbrush

    ON an intricately lit night
    Nature's symphony plays
    Stars are dotted across the midnight expanse
    setting the night ablaze
    Enchanting the world with its beauty
    the full moon shines brightly tonight
    a towering nightlight for all the world to see
    flooding the world with its angelic light
    god has surely taken his paintbrush out
    as we set our gazes on the midnight painting
    tranquility shines in peace on the world
    as the so called "real" worlds of all start fainting
    The tinted night is one of a kind
    indeed a tranquil and intricate night
    as the moon sinks into the emerald ocean
    the view is erased as a sunset is painted over the sight!


    By Laura Turpin

    Please let me know what u think
     
  2. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    It's beautiful. Makes me want to see it in all its glory.
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much!! Just as some music gives me imagery, your poem gives me music - something like one of Beethoven's Sonatas, the Moonlight, maybe. :smile:

    least
     
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