Mind Games

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sadeyes, Oct 11, 2012.

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  1. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This night of danger
    left to the fates.
    My mind seized by madness;
    the monsters berate.

    Am I to make it
    again to survive?
    Deceptions of lucidity;
    To be alive.
     
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    hugs to you
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks TE...I get through bad nights with words...cannot use alcohol or sweets anymore
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    words are so much more powerful hun keep using them hugs
     
  5. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    I love reading your poetry. It's so dark yet relateable. <3
     
  6. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks so much Sam...hope you are OK

    I looked through some of my work and found that when I write something lighter, it is bittersweet as well...here is an example:

    When it is time for me to go
    I only ask one thing.
    Look at nature’s loveliness
    and listen to birds sing.

    All other things are details.
    So few within our control.
    Remember me in beauty,
    And live the kindness I extoled.
     
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  7. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    beautiful
     
  8. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks my friend
     
  9. FrainBart

    FrainBart Staff Alumni

    Both are so full of emotion :hug: and the second so beautiful :hug:
     
  10. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks so much...hope you are doing better
     
  11. Jackie's Strength

    Jackie's Strength Staff Alumni

    Both pieces really spoke to me... the first, I could relate to all too well... the second... I felt tears beginning to form... much love to you.
     
  12. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    You too Jackie
     
  13. BornFree

    BornFree Well-Known Member

    :grouphug:
     
  14. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks so much Ditsy
     
  15. youRprecious!

    youRprecious! Antiquities Friend

    Yes, beautiful...... words are so powerful and influence our thoughts and feelings, so lovely to read these :) :pinkrose:
     
  16. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks so much Ur...yes, words are so very powerful...as in my sig, they can truly change a person's feelings
     
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