Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Oct 2, 2006.

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  1. "your words so poignant, soulful and true
    show how much wisdom there is in you
    it does not feel a waste to me
    and i am sure
    this is not all you want to be
    but keep in mind how much you give
    through your lessons learned
    and the tribulations lived
    to me you are a work of art
    a priceless gift who touches my heart"

    Thank you Sadeyes, and all...You know who you are...

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    Oh, if I could only see
    the Me the way that you see me;
    You say I’m strong, and wise,
    though I’ve shown the pain behind my eyes
    And I’ve seen your very own likewise
    So slowly as my spirit dies
    you claim to see my beauty
    What a gift of trust and wonder
    to truly know such another,
    though our wits and souls are torn asunder;
    The grace to have a witness
    inspite of our weakness
    Alas, it rarely seems enough
    to make it through to words
    For oh, the suffering
    and the toll it takes!
    Yet, the difference your reflected view makes
    is that I may be real
    in all the sorrow that I feel,
    so that you know it too
    And that makes the story
    of you and I

    Last edited: Oct 2, 2006
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dearest FAL1;

    I LOVE YOU HONEY!! :smile: :smile: :smile:

    love and hugs,

    least xoxoxox
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    you are very welcome...as i have said before, this is something you have earned...yes, through the school of 'hard knocks', and Lord, many of us have our graduate degrees from there...but still, you use your insight to express the deepest emotions...big hugs
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