Mommy is old

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  1. Survivor58

    Survivor58 Member

    86 yrs old. How much longer will she be around? I must die before her. My inner child will go insane if she dies first. He is screaming now. The little three year old has been screaming for her to accept him since 1949. Time is running out.

    You packed in the morning, I stared out the window
    And I struggled for something to say
    You left in the rain without closing the door
    I didn't stand in your way.

    But I miss you more than I missed you before
    And now where I'll find comfort, God knows
    'Cause you left me just when I needed you most
    Left me just when I needed you most.

    Now most every morning, I stare out the window
    And I think about where you might be
    I've written you letters that I'd like to send
    If you would just send one to me.

    'Cause I need you more than I needed before
    And now where I'll find comfort, God knows
    'Cause you left me just when I needed you most
    Left me just when I needed you most.

    You packed in the morning, I stared out the window
    And I struggled for something to say
    You left in the rain without closing the door
    I didn't stand in your way.

    Now I love you more than I loved you before
    And now where I'll find comfort, God knows
    'Cause you left me just when I needed you most
    Oh yeah, you left me just when I needed you most
    You left me just when I needed you most.
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    God this is so sadly beautiful - what a lovely piece of work.:smile: I'm sorry for the feelings that spawned it tho.:sad:

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  3. These are lyrics to a song (I can't think of the band - just Googled- Vanwarmer Randy) - you REALLY ought to give credit where credit is due!!!!!!! It's not fair to post words that arent' yours without where they come from. SOMEONE had to SUFFER for their expressions.... How would you feel if someone stole YOUR words?! Shit like this makes me really angry...

    !

    P.S. My 'mommy' is old too, but she's used me up - I have no life. And she betrayed me big time. I'm practically insane now, and I wish she'd died while I still had my wits about me. Sounds cruel, but I'm serious. I hope youre not in my shoes. You need your space and life.
     
    Last edited: Jan 9, 2007
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