moonlight

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by hollowvoice, Jan 22, 2011.

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  1. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    oh to be stranded on a distant moon
    no chance of rescue at least not soon
    to walk around in no atmosphere
    its not like im gonna be missed here
    i live in a darkness that you cant see
    youve no idea what its like to be me
    oh to be stranded on a lifeless moon
    with only me their and my friend gloom
     
  2. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    thats so nice!! it reads so lyrical!.. Encore!.. :hug:
     
  3. black orchid

    black orchid Well-Known Member

    Nice. Saw this poem on another forum last week :)
     
  4. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    thanks guys,yeah another forum i use
    no copyrights lol
     
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    How i wish i could be on that moon too very well written hugs
     
  6. ~Young-Violet~

    ~Young-Violet~ Banned Member

    Aww that is honestly beautiful x
    I do hope you keep expressing your self through poetry x
     
  7. doityourself

    doityourself Well-Known Member

    Hi my name is gloom:sigh:, I see you and I feel it to, pick me up on your way to that moon, and Ill ride it out with you.
     
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