More or Less

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by xan, Dec 2, 2009.

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  1. xan

    xan Chat Buddy

    The first few lines were tumbling around in my head... so I gave it an ending, it sucks I just wanted to write it down somewhere...

    I am the harbringer of my death,
    The architect of my own demise,
    My birth foretold my end,
    My life is nothing but lies.

    I dwell in empty sorrow,
    Wallow in what I have lost,
    I'll never find the missing piece,
    But I endure and ignore the cost.

    Oh how I yearn to feel the warmth,
    To feel the smiles, the tears, the fear,
    My insides are empty, I am hollow,
    Pain overwheling, nothing left...
    I become no more and you become no less
  2. ghost_rider

    ghost_rider Member

    Wow, moving, deep. I like it.

    I can feel many of those words and thoughts.
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