Morning Rhyme, A poem for Existentialists,...

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Morning Rhyme
    A poem for
    Existentialists,
    Nihilists
    and Agnostics

    mirror, mirror on the wall,
    am I really here at all?
    I see you, but look at me,
    so who is it I really see?

    are you here or am I there?
    am I really meant to care?
    I see my eyes, I feel my face,
    but am I really in this place?

    am I real?
    or am I fake?
    perhaps I'm some
    false god’s mistake?

    still, I have mass,
    and take up space…
    a little “matter”,
    the human race?​
     
  2. shades

    shades Staff Alumni

    I love it!
     
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Why, thank you! (tbh, I had fun doing that one!)
     
  4. Animosity

    Animosity Forum & Chat Buddy

    I really enjoyed reading it! It was very good and well written!
     
  5. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Politely put and still gets the point across. Me likes it!
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I :wub: it :D
     
  7. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I really enjoyed reading your poem thanks mary
     
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