Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Dec 24, 2006.

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  1. Mother
    Try to reach me
    I’m out of touch
    You wasted me
    You took too much…
    You gave away my gifts
    without permission
    You betrayed me
    without contrition
    The best years of my life
    have been warped and used
    I cannot get from ‘here to there’
    inspite of people saying they offer care,
    trying to reach me also
    You made me all alone
    Stole the freedom of my soul
    and boxed it in
    neat and tidy
    just like you’d like things to be,
    but they never were;
    Faking your happy family
    with Denial as the cause supreme

    I can’t tell you what that’s done to me

    I’ve died a death that of the likes of
    broken wings clipped in mid-flight

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    This is powerful indeed, your feelings burn right thru the page. I'm sorry the feelings and anger and frustration exist at all, but you express your feelings so damn perfectly...:eek:hmy:


  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a great poem hun... and the emotion is good...

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