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motionless mask of mine

Discussion in 'Rants, Musings and Ideas' started by -GirlxNextxDoor-, Nov 11, 2007.

  1. -GirlxNextxDoor-

    -GirlxNextxDoor- Well-Known Member

    A little poem of mine...

    What is similar,
    between me and my reflection.
    Looking past the mirror frame,
    i feel we are not the same...

    Staring at myself,
    i smile hatefully.
    In spite of that, inside,
    its tearing me into peices, i cry.

    I want to hide my everything,
    to put on a motionless mask.
    Never to be wet from the tear,
    and sobs that you never hear.

    They try to look past my eyes,
    to seek beyond their peaceful blue.
    I laugh as you have no clue,
    as how i hush the silent inner scream.

    How hard i try to wash away everything,
    how i lie to myself over time.
    how i feel ashamed of my weakness and habits day after day,
    how i am losing sight of my steady pathway...


    sorry i know the rhyming and rythmn are off but this is how i feel and i think how others feel too :sad:
     
  2. Melancholy

    Melancholy Well-Known Member

    That's beautiful :smile:
     
  3. -GirlxNextxDoor-

    -GirlxNextxDoor- Well-Known Member

    thankyou i might post more...i don't know
     
  4. D3ath

    D3ath Well-Known Member

    Hope you dont mind me bumping this up.

    Just had to say great poem, im sure that reflects how alot of people feel.
     
  5. Drifter

    Drifter Well-Known Member

    Everything about your poem is true. Its great
     
  6. Eztral

    Eztral Member

    Describing feelings, and getting it to rime\rythm can be a really hard thing, I think you did a awsome job though :)