Move Along

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  1. RCC

    RCC Well-Known Member


    Move Along

    I close my eyes and I'm there again
    My dreams die as I descend
    Goodbye to you
    So long, Adieu
    I'm nothing... without you

    Hello, Ingenue
    And how are you
    I'm glass... I'm see through...

    Penatrate - My patina
    Infilirate - My membrane
    (Now) Everytime - That I see yea'
    All I feel - Is disdain...

    Off-course once more
    Found left a shore
    Alone... Detatched

    You're on my mind
    Between the lines
    You're everywhere...
    You're omnipresent

    Penatrate - My patina
    Infilirate - My membrane
    (Now) Everytime - That I see yea'
    All I feel - Is disdain...

    You're selfish - You're merciless
    You're sublime - You're my bliss
    You're everything - You're all
    I'm vaporous at your call

    Your promise - Is poison
    My ending - Has begun
    Ardency 's the culprit
    It's captivating - I need it

    Stab me in the back again
    Fucking confuse and condescend
    Stab me in the back again
    Make our beginning become our end

    Penatrate - My patina
    Infilirate - My membrane
    (Now) Everytime - That I see yea'
    All I feel - Is disdain...
     
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  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    RCC,
    I do not know what to say about your poem. I loved reading it. I think that your poem was very deep and emotional and it is also powerful. I also like the way that you worded it. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. I hope to see more of your poems. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
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