Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Självmord, Aug 7, 2011.

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  1. Självmord

    Självmord Active Member

    Talk through me
    See through me
    When my presence is hiding
    Take my soul
    Take my body
    Steal my voice
    Steal my eyes
    Make them blind
    I followed you to the edge of madness...
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    i hope you never let that happen hun You take care of you okay
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    For me, your poem definitely evokes the idea of one person giving him/herself over to another - entity, soul, personality. That last line felt like a chill going down my back. Nicely done poem. And, I hope you are all right. :hug:
  4. Självmord

    Självmord Active Member

    Thank you so much for your words, your description somewhat sums up what all the thoughts in my head writing the words down... Oh, and right now I'm absolutely fine :] thank you
  5. Självmord

    Självmord Active Member

    I'm sorry, it's just so hard at times.. sometimes I just want to embrace it. But mostly I fight it. And I guess I'll keep on, until I can't.
    Thank you for caring
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