Mus/lim

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by pit, Nov 25, 2009.

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  1. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Mus/lim
    As in
    Slum of the mind
    Always behind

    Mus/lim
    As in must do this
    Must do that

    Mus/lim
    As in limit your eyes
    Limit your ears
    Live in a slum
    You must unbecome

    Slim is your cheer
    You must live in fear
     
  2. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    Very intelligently done. Well done :) :hugtackles:
     
  3. Scully

    Scully Well-Known Member

    Very good. Thanks for sharing. :hugtackles:
     
  4. Chargette

    Chargette Well-Known Member

    Very well done. I like it.
     
  5. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Thanks everybody!

    :bubble:
     
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