My Angel

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by saint6, Sep 6, 2011.

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  1. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    Once again, this is about another dream I had last night, I'm unable to write unless it is about a dream anymore.



    The word you told me
    in my time of need
    saved me from the
    demons inside of me
    kept them quiet
    while you set me free
    from the shackles
    they once had over me
    walking towards the
    one of my dreams
    changed the views
    she once had over me
    so once again I thank you
    for making me believe
    you are my angel
    who watches over me
     
  2. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    It has a very dream-like quality or feel (for lack of a better word). I like it. It's like I'm taking a stroll on a calm day at the beach where it's going to be nighttime soon. Just time to think. That's how it feels like to me as a reader. :hug: Thanks for sharing it.

    Alex
     
  3. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    Thanks for your thoughts :).
    and btw, for those interested, the "word" that I was told was courage :).
     
  4. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    Thanks for sharing the word. I had no idea what it was. :)
     
  5. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    Yeah, I was gonna name it courage and include it in the poem, but I couldn't make it sound quite right. So instead of writing it around that word, I wen't a different direction and focused more on the source of who told me it :).
     
  6. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    Cool! Glad it worked out well for you. :)
     
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