My Contest With Death

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by JustSam, Dec 8, 2008.

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  1. JustSam

    JustSam Well-Known Member

    It's a race.
    But I'm losing, losing, losing.
    Losing ground, losing space,
    This really isn't that much of a race.

    It's more like fate.
    It's more like fighting what isn't my fight,
    the fact that I'm here, no I don't have the right.
    It's not the way.

    And I can see, clear ahead of me,
    that heavy black mass,
    it's going too fast.

    I can't keep up,
    I'm not strong enough.

    I've lost.
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem Sam!I like it :)
     
  3. JustSam

    JustSam Well-Known Member

    Well,
    it's really not that happy of a poem.
    But, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    It's kind of basically a poem about how I'm accepting the fact that I deserve to die.
    But, thanks.
    I appreciate the compliment :smile:
     
  4. jonstark

    jonstark Well-Known Member

    I wonder who's gonna win.
     
  5. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    :hug: i hope for you hun

    good writing btw
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    You don't deserve to die :hug:
     
  7. daniel2

    daniel2 Banned Member

    too emo lol
     
  8. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    daniel makes me laugh
    and makes sam laugh too
    daniel's a pretty cool kid
    :hug:
     
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