My Daughter

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by me myself and i, Dec 13, 2010.

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  1. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    At a first an aged silence and then a breath
    What a poignant difference, to that of death
    As i showed you the town, the beach and the sea
    I promised you then, you meant all to me

    I remember so well when we were three
    Mum, me and you, astride my knee
    A time full of laughter as we played on the sand
    A time full of love as she clasped my hand

    Know that i have never felt so much pain
    Always i count before together again
    My daughter i love you and Johnny too
    Even though things are now forced,to be a new

    In absence i swear there is nothing to fear
    Your love and my promise i will hold dear
    Unconditional and deep, but set free you both are
    I will love you both close but as equally afar
     
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Wow that is beautifully written very heart touching
     
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  3. mulberrypie

    mulberrypie Well-Known Member

    this is the sweetest thing ever, pete. beautifully written straight from the heart!
     
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  4. Ravenwing

    Ravenwing Well-Known Member

    That is powerful writing. Thank you for sharing it.
     
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