Yeah, I'm new here. Saw the poet's corner and figured it'd be a good place to get some feedback on my stuff. Some info about this: I don't sit down and think out the poem before I write, I just basically freestyle my way through it, writing how I feel and just rhyming as I go. Hope you all like! I call this one "Again and again" Again and again is circles round and round I feel loneliest when I'm in the midst of a crowd Please help me out, I need this thought to flee I need my own mind back, I need to think free I'm sick of my mind being pulled this way and that I'll do anything to stop it, bash it in with a bat ANYTHING TO STOP, that's all I pled I claw at the temples till they finally bleed Still the thought echos, oh when will it leave Someone please help! Find a way to relieve But alas there is nothing. No one can stop it Sadly, I must deal with this pain, I finally admit.