My first SMS poem...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by lifeisashedog, Mar 9, 2008.

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  1. lifeisashedog

    lifeisashedog Well-Known Member

    Need to forget.
    And need to fly.
    Coma coffin.
    And deep blue sky.
     
  2. ScouseJM

    ScouseJM Well-Known Member

    :hug:
     
  3. Rose24

    Rose24 Chat & Forum Buddy

    sorry, made me smile, and then cry.

    I don't think i've ever read anything that has given me such an array of emotions.
    My existance summed up in four lines.
     
  4. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    That's really beautiful.
     
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