My Friend *Trigger*

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by IntheEnd, Apr 17, 2006.

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  1. IntheEnd

    IntheEnd New Member

    A poem i wrote a few years back.

    I sat in the cold
    alone in the dark
    before i met you
    my friend with the spark

    a tear every night
    no way to vent
    onto others
    my sadness went

    they laughed and they laughed
    they hooted and hollered
    while i sat alone
    like i wasn't bothered

    inside i was screaming
    for someone to talk to
    but none of that matters
    now i have met you

    i will always love
    as much as i hate you
    you leave me red raw
    but always stay true

    my essence slides down you
    when your job is done
    we made our love
    together as one

    you never laughed
    you were always there
    with your shiney surface
    and your silvery glare

    you touched me with passion
    you relieved my strife
    each day i wonder
    when you'll take away my life

    now i weep my last breath
    my debt re-payed
    as i say goodbye
    to my friend the blade
  2. Re: My Friend

    Oh WOW!!!

    (wow... that's powerful)
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Re: My Friend

    Powerful.... although you MIGHT want to put a trig warning on it, just my opinion though... but that is some VERY good and powerful writing.

  4. clueless

    clueless Member

    Re: My Friend

    That is so good, I wish I could write as well as this... the best I can do are letters.
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    Re: My Friend

    it was a powerful poem...

    i am wondering if a mod or admin should put a trig warning on it...

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