My Heroine.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Shadowplay, Jan 20, 2008.

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  1. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    There is this girl who rules my soul.
    my heart and mind and all thats gold.

    She's my heroine.

    She comforts me when i am down.
    and brings me back down to the the ground.

    She's my heroine.

    When i cant cope she fixes it all.
    when i'm a mess she helps me fall.

    Her name is heroin.​
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Damn. Dude... :sad:

    Nicely written.. intense concept :hug:
  3. Dudly

    Dudly Well-Known Member

    Nice poem, I like the idea.
    Thing I like about lyrics in poems and songs
    is they mean what you think they mean
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    very nice poem:biggrin:
  5. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    That's a very strong poem. Well done. :hug:
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