My Last Sunset

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Persistence Of Loss, Aug 10, 2007.

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  1. Last cup of coffee, last cigarette.
    Last night of doubt, last night of regret.
    Last night of anger, last night of pain.
    Last night of failure, last walk in the rain.

    Last time to see my friends.
    Last chance to tie up loose ends.
    One last pill, One last drink.
    One last moment to sit and think.

    Last cup of coffee, last cigarette.
    As I sit and watch my last sunset.
     
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Persistence,
    Wow I liked your poem. It has deep meaning to it and it has emotion in it. If you ever need to talk send me a pm sweetie. I am here if you need to someone to talk too. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  3. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    that's beautiful..
    i love your poem.
     
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