My Mind

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Luliby, Sep 11, 2006.

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  1. Luliby

    Luliby Staff Alumni

    My mind is mush
    My mind is numb
    My mind is oatmeal splattered all over the floor, walls and ceiling in my head
    My mind is a burning pulsing endless torment of empty pain
    A thousand wet blankets of despair lay over me
    I can barely move for grief
    I can't think
    I can't stop thnking
    My mind is mush
     
  2. A very apt and painful description...

    I especially love this:

    "A thousand wet blankets of despair lay over me
    I can barely move for grief"

    It almost makes me cry

    FAL1
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I particularly like "I can't think
    I can't stop thinking"

    I often feel that way and it drives me nuts!:wink:

    Good one!!:smile: :smile:

    least
     
  4. immure

    immure Account Closed

    made me think how confusious likes to come and play in that mush. send cofusious home and all will hold no demise. and oatmeal and vanilla ice cream breakfasts
     
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