My mind's eye

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Blank with Empty, Oct 8, 2007.

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  1. Blank with Empty

    Blank with Empty Well-Known Member

    In my minds eye theirs a noise coming, so i poise myself, on the tracks with all my facts, ready to act thats its okay to obey, what seems right to me, I feel the vibrations ringing in my bones, a tone that rattles me out of position, its another rendition of my own attrition, I see the light and my muscles get tight, the fright looms down, I start to frown, I almost drown, my breath runs short,it starts to hurt, that I might be missed, and I've never been kissed, its so close yet so far, the train's horn sounds and then it pounds me down. good thing its just my minds eye
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  2. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    Although I still havent found the true meaning to this, I still love it. You're real talented too :biggrin:
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    love it also :)
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