My pain!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Helpneed, Apr 15, 2012.

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  1. Helpneed

    Helpneed Member

    My pain,
    My life is full of hurt,
    I am sad and constintly feel bad.
    My pain takes me over,
    My pain is my controller.
    Why keep this pain and let it show,
    When I can give up and let it go.
    No one understands my pain,
    And in this I have no gain.
    My life means nothing, as if I thought I could be something.
    I am alone,
    I stay unknown,
    For these people do not know me,
    They are happy they are free,
    I am trapped in my own mind,
    There is no door I will ever be able to find,
    For me there is no expression for all of this depression,
    In my life I have lots of pain,
    All this pain just brings me shame.
    I am not worthy to live,
    So my life I am ready to give!
  2. jamesonnk

    jamesonnk Member

    That was beautiful. Im not going to say i know what youre going through because i dont. I do know though that some things arent your fault and that there is at least one person that would miss you greatly if you were gone. Also, things can only get so bad. If you just hold on a little longer sweetie than things might get better. I know that in the moment things seem hopeless but its not always like that and I wish the best for you. Im here anytime to talk.
  3. DarknessSurroundsMe

    DarknessSurroundsMe Well-Known Member

    Your words are true for me and if you ever need help and want to talk please feel free to message me.
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I want to reach through this screen and reach out my hand so you know you are not alone.
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    YOU ARE WORTHY hun you are so important and special thanks for asking me to be your friend I know that pain and you express it so well in your poetry Keep doing that ok keep letting go of that pain through your words hugs
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