My poem I put on deviant art. (very depressing).

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by depressedGirl, Dec 6, 2008.

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  1. depressedGirl

    depressedGirl Well-Known Member

    Don't know if you will like but Please let me know what you think:mellow:

    I'll Disappear.

    I'm walking down the street
    I'm hoping for a seat
    I don't care who I meet
    I don't even care about the heat

    It don't matter if I'm here
    Cause some day I'll disappear

    I can't be bothered anymore
    So I'm going out the door
    Everything is such a bore
    I've gone of everything in store

    There is nothing left to fear
    Cause one day I'll disappear

    Someday I'll fade away
    search all the world today
    No matter what I won't stay
    I'll be gone without delay

    I don't care for people who sneer
    sooner or later I'll disappear

    You know I'm usually by the sea
    But there you won't find me
    You'll find I'm gone as can be
    Disappeared, now thats the key.

    In my eye there'll be no tear
    No regrets as I disappear

    I don't know what I have done wrong
    Today I'll sing my favourite song
    Then you'll notice I have gone
    Sorry that I couldn't stay long

    I'll be gone then oh dear
    But too late, I'll disappear

    Everything in life makes me mad
    Why am I always sad
    Why is everything so bad
    To disappear, I'll be glad

    Yes, My actions are not clear
    it don't matter. I'll disappear

    Now the end is soon to come
    I'm going to write all. Not some
    I feel like the only one
    I feel really numb

    People like all kinds of gear
    But I like nothing then to disappear

    Now this already is the end
    I have nothing left to lend
    only this poem that I send
    There is nothing left to pretend

    The time is now very near
    Now it is time to disappear
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Awesome poem hun, I love it :heart:
     
  3. lifeisashedog

    lifeisashedog Well-Known Member

    Sad :sad:
     
  4. depressedGirl

    depressedGirl Well-Known Member

    Thanks
     
  5. depressedGirl

    depressedGirl Well-Known Member

    I am sorry but at the time I felt like giving up and had to get it from my system.:sad:
     
  6. Dragon

    Dragon Staff Alumni

    What's your dA username? :)
     
  7. LostSpirit

    LostSpirit Well-Known Member

    i really felt the emotion as i read that x
     
  8. tendenCs_89

    tendenCs_89 Well-Known Member

    This is amazing.
    You're really talented della :)
    x
     
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