my poems corner- even they don't even rhyme

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by LSD, Jun 2, 2008.

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  1. LSD

    LSD Well-Known Member

    i'm tired..
    i'm tired of being weak
    i'm tired of being me
    i'm tired of dealing with this everyday
    waking up in the mornig
    begging for its end
    sleeping every night
    and hoping never wake

    smiling at people
    trying hard not to cry

    playing with suicide
    with a blade in my hands
    cuz i don't have the courage
    to end my own life

    i can't belive
    how pathetic i can be
    its such a lame
    this person has to exist
    mommy.. daddy
    i didn't want to be here
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    sad poem hun, thanks for sharing :hug:
     
  3. LSD

    LSD Well-Known Member

    thankies :'D

    its a kinna oldie one.. nameless
    i'm not good with words so its weird that i write a poem that i kinna like a lil
     
  4. LSD

    LSD Well-Known Member

    damn ifeel like deleting this shit
     
  5. ...Ain't gonna happen...


    As far as most of us are concerned, there are no rules about poetry - they're YOUR words, YOUR feelings - and it's not up to anyone to judge them worthy or not. And if letting them our helps you, then that's all that matters...

    I liked the honesty of your words... and I think you should keep writing...
     
  6. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    You don't need to rhyme or try to otherwise fit your expression into any kind of mold. Writing is always for you, and for others only if you wish it to be.

    (Mine don't rhyme either!)
     
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