My poetry

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  1. Grotesque

    Grotesque Well-Known Member

    Bee sting

    Droning inside a hollow mind
    Where bee's buzz and sting.
    Yellow and black fur skin coats
    hide their painful way of doing things.
    Wild asylum of gray and red
    I feel as though I'm dying.
    Swollen; closed up tight--
    I can feel my mind flying.
    Through my pale blue eyes I see
    the bees around are swarming.
    Tears run rampid down my face
    Mourning, mourning, mourning.
    As reckless waters flood my sight,
    I collapse as the bees surround.
    As my view of light deceases, so does my life.
     
  2. Grotesque

    Grotesque Well-Known Member

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    Envy

    Green with envy,
    we must feed.
    Blind the poor
    so they don't see.
    Hold your body
    as it twists and turns.
    Wipe your fears
    with sticks and thorns.
    Break your promises,
    the truth is fake.
    Show everyone just how much
    you can take.
    Fuck the weak,
    for they are grounded.
    Fuck the sadness,
    for you are drownded.
    Breed on disease,
    it's what we live for.
    We are pittyful messes
    down to the core.
     
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  4. Grotesque

    Grotesque Well-Known Member

    Slurring speech
    Away with sound.
    Blending into
    ominous clouds.
    Bleeding trees
    with hollow cores--
    I cannot take
    this anymore.
     
  5. Grotesque

    Grotesque Well-Known Member

    Bump.
    (Feedback)
     
  6. twilightki

    twilightki Well-Known Member



    I like this one the best. It flows perfectly. Rare to find in poetry these days. :biggrin:
     
  7. Grotesque

    Grotesque Well-Known Member

    yay finally thank you!
     
  8. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    I like your poems :arms:
     
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