my rain

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Jan 9, 2006.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    nomadic mind
    absconds astray
    as rampant rain
    reigns this very
    disingenuous dull
    day but rain will
    never wash this
    misery away lifes
    insistent showers
    the malignant powers
    of my venomous
    melancholy wholly
    unholy i rage and i
    rot in turreted tawdry
    towers of saturated
    sorrow torrentially
    hammering me into
    tomorrow i beg
    and i steal and i
    beg and i borrow


    stolen strength
    lunging lawlessly
    to any desperate
    length stretching
    strain protruding pain
    protecting you from

    my treacherous rain*


    *reign
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Lentil; I really really like this one a lot, a lot. But I can't find words to supercede the praise always given over your new creations. I'd just be saying the same things as for the last one(s): Great - infuckingcredible - amazing - unbelieveable - and so on. You know how I feel about your writings.:smile: ...and the hits just keep on coming...Thanks for sharing your mind with us here. I appreciate the little mini-tours of your cranium with each new poem.:smile:

    Sooz xoxoxox
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like it. :)
     
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