My Sanctuary

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shatteredsoul, Feb 13, 2006.

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  1. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    I live within my own mind
    you cant hurt me, as well as no other
    the darkness i seek, is the darkness i shall keep
    the warmth of myself relaxes me
    the sound of my breathing calms me
    your cold lips brush past my cheek
    your cold hand clasps mine
    my warmth is drawn to you
    coldness sets into my body
    i lay in the dark, shivering
    in my mind i am well
    in my mind i am warm
    in my mind is where i live
    my mind, is my sanctuary
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was great hun! i loved it!

    love BP
     
  3. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    thanx. i think that one is one of my best poems that i have ever written.
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    It is...and its a great poem...it fits how I feel sometimes!
     
  5. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    thats good..i wanted to reach out to people with it.
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    And you will!

    BP
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Great poem sweetie x
     
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