Fright entered the room, As dark as night, he walked towards my mum again and gave her a fright He stared her in the eyes which made her freeze put his hands on her shoulders and she fell to her knees He was waering that cloak of shady grey walking the streets searching for his prey he walked with a limp his face full of hate she fel lon her back and accepted her fate and thats his story his anger still grows the thing that scares her is nobody knows.......... mum thought for a second in her coming death and fear she thought of what she loved and brought it near she stood up he backed down she knows he is still out there but now hiding underground love won............. my son wrote this :biggrin: what do u think?
hmy: That's really good! Really sensitive and mature for his age, too :smile:. You got a future poet on your hands there hun!
