My Wish

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by demuredawn, Jan 27, 2014.

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  1. demuredawn

    demuredawn Well-Known Member

    maybe this is ramblings, maybe it means something.... at this point, i dont really care, cuz it speaks my mind (even if it sounds sporadic and unconnected)

    My Wish

    One day I'll be gone
    The world will carry on
    People will smile just the same
    Most will forget my name

    There may be a few who remember my face
    But soon that will fade without a trace
    There may even be a few to say "I miss you"
    But their life will carry on without me too

    There is nothing I have done I would regret
    Though there is plenty I wish to forget
    Nobody seems to understand or even care
    The pain I feel... its everywhere

    All that I do or that I say
    Seems to echo that pain everyday
    Rather than help me though
    People would rather let me go

    That is... until I say "good bye"
    Then all they do is turn to sigh
    Tell me I'm making too much of things
    Nobody understands how much it stings

    If I try to explain ..
    I'm told I just like to complain
    If I try to be silent
    I'm told I'm being a tyrant

    There is no victory here for me
    Nothing for me to achieve
    It's all been stolen away
    And all my dreams kept at bay

    This world, with me, is done
    This battle, it has won
    When I am no longer on this earth
    The only regret I'll have, is my birth

    My life has been nothing but pain
    I have nothing to lose, and nothing to gain
    All I have is a wish to be done
    Released, and free to run...
  2. AnnieK

    AnnieK Well-Known Member

    it means something. something to me anyway. keep writing. i get it.
  3. very profound

    thank you for sharing
  4. demuredawn

    demuredawn Well-Known Member

    thank you annie and watching
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