My world

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Malcontent, Dec 29, 2006.

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  1. Malcontent

    Malcontent Staff Alumni

    I named the brightest star
    In the night sky after you.
    You are the centre of my chart,
    My point of reference,
    My one constant.
    A thousand years and a million words,
    Couldn't contain what you mean to me.
    Only the everlasting sky,
    An infinity of stars,
    And the universe.
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni


    Simple, sweet and compelling.

    Wonderful job.
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow... Mal..

    that was a great poem... i enjoyed it so much...

  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    That's beautiful, Mal!!:eek:hmy: I love it!:smile: :smile:


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