mystical dreamer

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by bella muerte, Aug 22, 2007.

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  1. bella muerte

    bella muerte Well-Known Member

    mystical dreamer

    My smile is locked inside a prison
    where the sun refuses to shine,
    a victim of an ancient lore
    left from another place - another time.

    My heart remains a sanctuary
    My soul is kept in chains,
    those gentle dreams receding
    like the moonlight on the wane.

    On the island of life's sorrow
    I yearn for distant shores,
    for freedom from this darkness
    and segregation from remorse.

    In the valley on the edge of night
    those feeble prison walls remain,
    uncontrolled passions cooped up within
    a living, breathing blood-red stain.

    comments welcomed :smile:
     
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Bella,
    I love this poem. It is deep and emotional. I love the way that you worded it as well. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. Just send me a pm and I will get back to you as soon as I get it. I hope to see more of your poems. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  3. bella muerte

    bella muerte Well-Known Member

    thanks crystal :hug:
    i'm posting more, i love writing, it keeps me sane!
     
  4. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Bella,
    I know what you mean about it keeping you sane. It does the same exact thing for me.
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    love it :heart:
     
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