NDE (Near Death Experience)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by asvt, Nov 9, 2007.

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  1. asvt

    asvt Well-Known Member

    MY first poem i have ever done an am quite pleased with how it came out about my search for a meaning or purpose to life.


    A search for knowlegde, meaning and purpose​


    I want a near death experience
    I want to die for 2 minutes
    I want to gain the knowledge of the universe
    And everything in it

    I hope that I die
    And then understand
    To become complete
    And know who I am

    My search for knowledge and meaning
    Has come to an end
    There is only two choices
    And now it depends

    To live a lie
    In misery and sorrow
    Or to die for truth
    And no tomorrow

     
  2. Trip the Dark fantastic

    Trip the Dark fantastic Well-Known Member

    Great poem, asvt. I liked the soothing rhythm, -like being in a boat- only to stare into the waterfall which is the poems dramatic end. A poem of grand gestures well done. Brill. :cool::cool:
     
  3. crackedglass

    crackedglass Well-Known Member

    really great poem! i like the way you've done it. As trip the dark said it has a great rythym. :smile:
     
  4. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    asvt,
    I like the way that you did your poem. It has a great rythm to it and I understood it comepletely. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  5. danni

    danni Chat Buddy

    i love it hun :hug:
     
  6. asvt

    asvt Well-Known Member

    Thanks
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great poem :)
     
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