Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by RainbowChaser, Apr 19, 2007.

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  1. RainbowChaser

    RainbowChaser Well-Known Member

    I needed you to hold me and you hurt me,
    But when you needed me I was there.
    You just wanted someone to play with
    I just longed for someone to care.

    I still want you back and I'm sorry:
    Not for you, but for me.
    Feeling trapped and hurt was never right,
    And you never understood what I need.

    Do what you feel you have to forever,
    But know you will never be what I need.

    Note: This was written in chat while I was sat in Triggering Subjects on my own, which is why it makes next to no sense.​
  2. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    This is really good. I have nothing bad to say about your poetry because i believe if it's about you or anything from the heart, it's going to be a good poem no matter what. Anything that comes from the heart is good in my eyes. Just remember though that you're an amazing poet.


  3. RainbowChaser

    RainbowChaser Well-Known Member

    Awwww :shy: Thanks hunny :hug:
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