neon

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Jan 17, 2007.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    the neon sign
    above my mind
    reads 'suicide'
    it illuminates the
    tragic toothless sky
    and my head so
    heavy with thoughts
    that breathe and
    flourish and multiply
    as I wade through the
    stagnant muddy waters
    of these washed out years
    far too full and terrified
    to eliminate the fears
    as they cleanse the banks
    of my restless shores
    and negate the instinct
    that naturally craves more

    the runt amongst
    the blooming litter
    the others were quick
    and so much fitter
     
  2. Dragon

    Dragon Staff Alumni

    As I said in chat -- I love it ^^

    Well done sweetie.
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Excellent, excellent!!:eek:hmy: :goodone: :thumbup: :clap: :flowers: :hug: You never cease to awe and amaze me with your writings.:eek:hmy:

    lots of love and admiration,

    least xoxoxox
     
  4. Most acutely painful

    And brilliant

    Forgive me I'm short on words but mean all 5 deeply


    FAL1
     
  5. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    First thing I have written in ages.

    Thank you all.

    LI
     
  6. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    It is brilliant.
     
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