never give up

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Gemballs, Jun 14, 2009.

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  1. Gemballs

    Gemballs Well-Known Member

    within this big wide world
    which surrounds us all
    we are sometimes to
    break down or fall
    although those who stand above us
    may make ups feel so small

    we tremble under the weight
    with the problems that hold us down
    then when we start to collapse
    no one seems to be around

    we will try to fight the world
    that will always seem to fight back
    although sometimes we are unable to
    as there are too many things we lack

    We will hide away
    upon the empty corners
    and will put pains upon ourselves
    however theres no escape from this
    so we must all suffer the same

    although we may have to struggle
    and we do all fail
    ill always be by your side
    and ill stay with you
    throught it all

    when you start to fall
    or break down
    i will always be your shoulder to cry on

    we will all have our very own faults
    and ups and downs
    we ae unable to smile all the time
    as everyone has to frown

    if we can stick together
    no matter what happens
    with the little bit of hope and faith
    anything will be achieved

    we will always get bad times
    all of us
    However i promise
    it will become better and clear
    if you never give up

    hwoever when you feel like you wish
    just remeber this
    you are able to die at any point
    but it will always take a strong person
    to live a lifetime.
  2. NotSureAnymore

    NotSureAnymore Well-Known Member

    This was very good and uplifting.
    "With the little bit of hope and faith.. anything will be achieved."

  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem :hug:
  4. Gemballs

    Gemballs Well-Known Member

    tyvm [;
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