New Life

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mordeci, Sep 14, 2009.

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  1. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

    New Life

    Under our old life,
    I still see your fading face,
    Your falling grace,
    And lustful taste,

    You were never in my heart
    But always in my thoughts
    Which are completely useless
    Due to your infrequent gaze

    Never were you with me,
    Yet we were always so close,
    But more often far away,
    Just a little out of place,

    Under the guise of a new life,
    I lost sight of your beautiful face,
    Your animal grace,
    And lustful taste.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    very poetic well written
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem :)
  4. mike25

    mike25 Well-Known Member

    Superb :smile:
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