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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ~PinkElephants~, Jul 21, 2007.

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  1. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    You still don't get it do you??
    You still can't see, can you?
    After all I've said and done
    You won't listen to a word I've said
    I am not okay, I am breaking
    I am not okay, I am dying inside
    You can't see my insides dying
    You can't feel the pain I'm feeling
    I can feel things breaking inside of me
    It feels like glass in my guts
    You still don't get it do you?
    You still can't see can you?
    At night I throw bricks at my soul
    I cut myself on the splinters of my life
    I sit in quiet rooms trying to find myself
    It never ends
    This feeling never dies
    I am a disease
    A sharp blade that keeps cutting night after night
    You still don't get it do you?
    You still can't see, can you?
    Scar tissue is stronger than normal flesh
    I am turning into a living scar
    I don't know whether to thank you
    Or myself
    So don't touch me
    It'll feel too good
    And then I'll fall apart
    The only thing holding me together now
    Is my pain
     
  2. Persephone

    Persephone Active Member

    Tried to delete. posted my poem in the wrong place. See "IN MEMORIAM"
     
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  3. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Amen Kells ...just about says it all
     
  4. Innocent

    Innocent Guest

    What a powerful poem! Truly, great work! *hugs*
     
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