new poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by jlbArt, Oct 23, 2015.

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  1. jlbArt

    jlbArt Well-Known Member

    A poem

    Silent waves are growing heavy,
    Tide is coming in, seabirds are whirling
    Vincent’s flowers are growing grey…
    I’ve stood all day...the rye remains untouched.
    My yellow sky is darkening, cool and crisp
    The horizon is clear all around...all around…

    White has made the first move...awaitin



    I can’t remember…
    I can’t remember…
    I can’t...
     
  2. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    Really nice poem, jlbart, you make a picture that makes the reader feel your emotions.
     
  3. jlbArt

    jlbArt Well-Known Member

    thank you very much
     
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