New Poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ~PinkElephants~, Sep 14, 2007.

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  1. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Something I just wrote...took me like 5 minutes. Still uneditted will fine tune it later.

    look at my facade
    look at my song and dance
    look at my smile
    and i'll pretend im real
    look at my act
    look at my happiness
    look at it all
    and i'll pretend i'm real
    when the reality is
    it's all an act
    it's all a lie
    it's all fake
    and i'm dying inside
    it's all a game
    to believe i'm alright
    it's all a sham
    and i'm dying inside
    look at my face
    look in my eyes
    look at it all
    and I'll pretend i feel
    feel the hugs
    feel the love
    feel the happiness
    and I'll pretend I feel
    when the reality is
    look at my cuts
    look at my scars
    look at the abuse
    i'm dying on the outside
    look at the tears
    look at the hate
    look at the truth
    i'm dying on the outside
    do you even see me
    would you even care
    would you see the truth
    behind my lying eyes
    would you see the pain
    the anger and the hurt
    I highly doubt you'd care
    so i'll pretend i'm real
     
  2. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    thats great kelly..
    it's quite different and really makes me think.
    I love it.
    xo
     
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