new poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by hi my name is, Dec 7, 2009.

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  1. hi my name is

    hi my name is Well-Known Member

    feeling alone with my bird's eye view
    isolated impossible watch what you do
    because they'll be watchin you if you oppose their view
    communication an obstacle read my review

    what do i do?
    stand here and blame who?
    blame myself for not making a move
    i can choose, read or make news
    snooze or lose my actions are paid dues

    for who? for me and you
    i love you
    deeper then the ocean paradise will come through
    from heart to heart
    lets start
    to break down the walls that keep us apart

    co create a better world
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem :)
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    heartfelt poem lovely
     
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