Nil & void

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by selfdepriver, Mar 31, 2012.

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  1. selfdepriver

    selfdepriver Member

    Sitting here
    my thoughts a mess
    The usual state of distress
    Please dont waste your time
    Reading the rest
    Only apathy i have to confess

    Life is a place full of smiles
    A parade of joy
    That i have tried
    Always the failure
    Far to many times
    In this bottomless pit
    Become self deprived
    Written upon my shirt
    "happiness not supplied"
    My thought in patterns
    Of dark shaped rhymes

    A fallen angel?
    I live in a hole
    How i came to be
    No one cares to know
    I am damaged goods
    Defective stock
    To be sealed away
    Behind a door thats locked
    Not a talent
    Not one skill
    Not of anyone
    Do i wish ill
    These fucking words
    This loss of space
    If you got sick
    Gladly take your place

    The emptiness i have inside
    Slowly drowning in its rising tide
    So spare yourself
    For i cannot be saved
    I am just filling in time
    Until the grave
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    well hun you surely do have a talent and that is writing poetry hugs to you
  3. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Eccentric writer, general weirdo, heedless heathen

    Sorry you feel this way :hug: I feel like this a lot of the time too. I think you do have a lot of talent in writing.
  4. selfdepriver

    selfdepriver Member

    Thanks Witty_Sarcasm
    Thanks total eclipse
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