no hope

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Nemo, Oct 5, 2014.

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  1. Nemo

    Nemo Well-Known Member

    as I lie amidst the grass
    wishing for the time to pass
    I look up to the pale blue sky
    and cannot hope but wonder why
    my life it goes from fast to slow
    - only those who've years can know
    each happy moment flies away
    yet pain, it lingers here all day
    I laugh and smile, this much is true
    but better days are far and few
    I lie here, hoping for something better
    whilst my cheeks become a little wetter.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Hugs to you I like your poem it creates a picture in ones mind it does sorry you are sad There is always hope sometimes it hide behind those clouds in the sky but it is still there hugs
     
  3. SillyOldBear

    SillyOldBear Teddy Bear Fanatic Staff Member Safety & Support

    "each happy moment flies away
    yet pain, it lingers here all day"



    O Nemo, you are so right.
     
  4. Nemo

    Nemo Well-Known Member

    thanks for the replies :) I wrote this a while ago and am generally doing a bit better than when I wrote this, but it still sticks with me.
    Hope you're OK SillyOldBear :hug:
     
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