No More Pain

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Mar 2, 2011.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    The loneliness in me,
    The sadness within,

    Why do they hurt my head,
    Why do I give in?

    I know they could stop,
    If only they would try,

    Instead to do a job,
    At making me cry.

    Why do I live?
    Why do I go on?

    They don’t care any,
    I matter to no one.

    It is almost time now,
    Almost time to be done,

    When I finish this,
    The pain will be in no one.

  2. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    I enjoyed that. Thank you for sharing. :)
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dam pain and sadness
    seem to rule
    time to show them your no fool
    you will not put up with them
    i am glad your posting
    making new friends
    your poetry it say so many things
    i hope in writing it
    some peace it brings

    Keep writing okay you do it so well hugs
  4. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    thanks eclipse, it brings much peace. it helps me understand what i want and need also.
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