No One-An Original by me

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  1. Amyblue

    Amyblue Member

    I'm including this in my poetry book that is in the works for publishing in about a year from now. Please let me know what you think.

    No One
    Spent so many years wandering the corridor
    Sliding little white notes under the locked door
    Wanting more
    So many years empty and sleeping, dreaming and weeping
    Capturing my soul in the darkened mirror
    Splintered shattered pieces comes together
    Reflection of a dim existence in my pain
    How dark will it be when the pieces come together again
    If they come together as they once were
    Will the shattered pieces dig deeper
    Bleeding my light into No One
    Weeping my life into No One
    Bleeding into No One
    Weeping into No One
    Breathing my soul into the darkened mirror
    Splintered shattered pieces come together
    Just a whisper of existence with a dim light to know she’s there
    YOU can only see her reflection in the darkened mirror
    Otherwise she’s invisible to all but me
    Dust the residue off the darkened mirror to see the shattered pieces falling into No One
    Bleeding into No One
    Disappearing into No One
    Breathing her soul into the darkened mirror
    Splintered shattered pieces come together
    It’s time to go! There’s No One there in the darkened mirror!
     
  2. Rai02

    Rai02 Active Member

    This is absolutely beautiful. Dark, but so awesome!
    I write poetry as well. It has always been one method that helps me to get things out and share them with people without coming right out and letting them know how messed up I really am sometimes.

    But, yea, I love this poem. You have a gift!
     
  3. X-Boy

    X-Boy New Member

    all i have

    May 15th, 2011 by X-Boy
    If I were To Scream With The Power of My Soul

    I Believe it will make The Sound of A Dragon’s Roar

    And A Dragon Will Come Out

    Out of Control; This Dragon Will Fly To The Sky

    And it Will Roar

    With Such A Magnificent Quake

    And it Will Look Down Upon The Way of World

    And With it’s Life

    It Spits out a Globulous Burst of Fire

    And Everything that was; becomes no more

    With It’s Last Breath It Looks down Upon The World One Last Time

    Finally.

    Silence.

    It Can Now Rest In Peace.
     
  4. Amyblue

    Amyblue Member

    Thanks:) It's just a way to let things out the way I know how
     
  5. Amyblue

    Amyblue Member

    Wow this is really amazing. Is it about anger or rage and just wishing for escape from what you carry on your shoulders? Please forgive me if I'm wrong but I like to look at the underlying story.
     
  6. Amyblue

    Amyblue Member

    Thanks It's just a way to let things out the way I know how. That's really good that you do that, and its a healthy way to express your feelings
     
  7. X-Boy

    X-Boy New Member

    On a waggon bound for market

    there`s a calf with a mournful eye.

    High above him there`s a swallow,

    winging swiftly through the sky.

    How the winds are laughing,

    they laugh with all their might.

    Laugh and laugh the whole day through,

    and half the summer`s night.

    Donna, Donna, Donna, Donna; Donna, Donna, Donna, Don.

    Donna, Donna, Donna, Donna; Donna, Donna, Donna, Don.

    "Stop complaining! said the farmer,

    Who told you a calf to be ?

    Why don`t you have wings to fly with,

    like the swallow so proud and free? + Chorus

    Calves are easily bound and slaughtered,

    never knowing the reason why.

    But whoever treasures freedom,

    like the swallow has learned to fly. + Chorus
     
  8. Amyblue

    Amyblue Member

    That's beautiful :) Wow and I especially love the last line about the swallow and freedom
     
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