no one cared...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by saint6, Jan 17, 2008.

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  1. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    the gods unwanted were sent to earth
    all forgotten at the day of birth
    none ever cared, ever showed love
    everyone stared, one beautiful dove
    turning black
    just a dark angel
    never gonna change again,
    alwayz gonna be lost, not knowing where to begin
    speechless, waiting for god
    for a single sign
    the next morning i disappeared

    no one cared...
  2. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    sad. but i like it.
  3. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    thx, ur comment means alot since im new at poems
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    i like this poem
  5. Crying All Time

    Crying All Time Well-Known Member

    it's really really sad, but it is beautiful
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