No One Cares

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by confuzzle, Jul 15, 2009.

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  1. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    No One Cares
    they are all so unaware
    of my plight
    but i don't want to give them flight

    My problems
    My issues
    scare them away,
    so I never say
    How much I hurt inside
    lonely, frightened, and scared

    It seems like such a simple fix
    just let them in
    let them see whats in my mix
    of memories, thoughts, and impulses

    But I can't
    it's not that I couldn't
    hell, it would help, so why I shouldn't?

    I'm stuck at a crossroads
    multiple paths, multiple branches
    can't even make up my mind

    I guess I brought this upon myself
    Leaving them out
    now when I need
    some sympathy
    I can't tell them, I'm conditioned myself too well
    because I mean it when I said
    No one, No one, No one cares
    about me
    no, not even me.


    just fyi, needed to get this out of my system. Not entirely reflective of my current feelings. Just tired right now.
  2. johnson8681

    johnson8681 Well-Known Member

    Great poem!
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I am glad you can write your feelings in poetry as sometimes thats how it feels when your alone that no one cares a dam but that again is the depression as people do care especially here.
  4. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    I care. Hello there! It flows and the emotion shows.

  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem :clap:
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