No One Cares

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by confuzzle, Jul 15, 2009.

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  1. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    No One Cares
    they are all so unaware
    of my plight
    but i don't want to give them flight

    My problems
    My issues
    scare them away,
    so I never say
    How much I hurt inside
    lonely, frightened, and scared

    It seems like such a simple fix
    just let them in
    let them see whats in my mix
    of memories, thoughts, and impulses

    But I can't
    it's not that I couldn't
    hell, it would help, so why I shouldn't?

    I'm stuck at a crossroads
    multiple paths, multiple branches
    can't even make up my mind

    I guess I brought this upon myself
    Leaving them out
    now when I need
    some sympathy
    I can't tell them, I'm conditioned myself too well
    because I mean it when I said
    No one, No one, No one cares
    about me
    no, not even me.


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    just fyi, needed to get this out of my system. Not entirely reflective of my current feelings. Just tired right now.
     
  2. johnson8681

    johnson8681 Well-Known Member

    Great poem!
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I am glad you can write your feelings in poetry as sometimes thats how it feels when your alone that no one cares a dam but that again is the depression as people do care especially here.
     
  4. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    I care. Hello there! It flows and the emotion shows.

    :mort:
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem :clap:
     
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