No One in Particular

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, May 27, 2010.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    Come now, gather around
    Grab a seat or sit on the ground.
    Are you ready to witness the event of the night?
    She's going to stop breathing tonight.
    Before you begin to clap and cheer,
    Look in her eyes and notice the fear.
    Her hands shake and her body sways
    Watch! It looks like she's got something to say!
    Her mouth forms words but her voice gives out
    Nothing can reach her, nothing but doubt.
    She looks up towards the crowd,
    Noticing their cheering has gotten loud.
    They tell her to get on with it,
    She cannot take another hit.
    Her confidence is gone, her soul diminished
    Now, it's time that her life is finished.
  2. mulberrypie

    mulberrypie Well-Known Member

    love it =)
  3. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    nice poem...:arms:
  4. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    :hug: thank you!
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